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d0ser
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posted: 2012-01-12 23:47:43 (ID: 23796) Report Abuse |
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the well blocked Defense Line can't do anything against
You accidentally put in two apostrophes. |
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posted: 2012-01-13 08:36:56 (ID: 23835) |
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d0ser wrote:
the well blocked Defense Line can't do anything against You accidentally put in two apostrophes. Please tell me where you have seen the 2 '? |
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| posted: 2012-01-13 08:47:37 (ID: 23838) Report Abuse | |
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Admin wrote:
d0ser wrote:
the well blocked Defense Line can't do anything against You accidentally put in two apostrophes. Please tell me where you have seen the 2 '? Maybe he have to clean his monitor screen first.  |
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JonnyP
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posted: 2012-01-13 09:17:05 (ID: 23843) Report Abuse |
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I don't see two either....
But it isn't good English anyway  |
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| posted: 2012-01-13 09:39:04 (ID: 23844) Report Abuse | |
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JonnyP wrote:
I don't see two either.... But it isn't good English anyway And what is a better english? Please give Pete a hint. Thanks Kottan |
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JonnyP
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posted: 2012-01-13 09:55:41 (ID: 23845) Report Abuse |
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The line from my last game:
6:54 2 and 4 to go on opp 39, Tod Heimonen (OC) snaps the ball to Jean François Tuqiri (QB), hands off to Christoper Henning (HB/C), he starts running over the left tackle, the well blocked Defense Line can't do anything against, and gets tackled by Sowande Adeoye (SS/R), forward progress: 4 yards, New first down ... double apostrophes - I see them now in my copy-paste - when the post is submitted one disappears 
... should be defensive line, not defense line ... the 'well blocked defense line can't do anything against' what? - it looks like a word is missing. Against needs to be followed by a noun or pronoun. Suggestions: - the defensive line are powerless to stop him - the defensive line are well-blocked - the offensive linemen dominate the defensive line Last edited on 2012-01-13 09:57:17 by JonnyP |
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Buffalo
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posted: 2012-01-13 10:33:19 (ID: 23850) Report Abuse |
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JonnyP wrote:
...starts running over the left tackle, the well blocked Defense Line can't do anything against, and gets tackled by ... What is with: ...starts running over the left tackle, the well blocked Defensive Line can't tackle him and he gets tackled by ... Last edited on 2012-01-13 10:33:32 by Buffalo |
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| posted: 2012-01-13 10:38:06 (ID: 23851) Report Abuse | |
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Buffalo wrote:
JonnyP wrote:
...starts running over the left tackle, the well blocked Defense Line can't do anything against, and gets tackled by ... What is with: ...starts running over the left tackle, the well blocked Defensive Line can't tackle him and he gets tackled by ... Please not twice the word "tackle". I think better is: ...starts running over the left tackle, the well blocked Defensive Line can't stop him and he gets tackled by ... |
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Buffalo
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posted: 2012-01-13 10:41:19 (ID: 23853) Report Abuse |
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Kottan wrote:
Please not twice the word "tackle". I think better is: ...starts running over the left tackle, the well blocked Defensive Line can't stop him and he gets tackled by ... much better  |
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JonnyP
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posted: 2012-01-13 10:58:07 (ID: 23857) Report Abuse |
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'well blocked defensive line' - while not really wrong, is not exactly good either
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