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JohnLegend
posted: 2013-04-13 23:10:05 (ID: 90958) Report Abuse
In the manual under the training section there is a spelling error on the last sentence. I think it should say they but its a bit difficult because the grammar isn't great. The sentence is below.

much more htey use it as basic set, and enhance it to have optimal training conditions for their players...
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posted: 2013-04-14 10:28:22 (ID: 90973) Report Abuse
so what could this sentence be to be right?
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captainhero
posted: 2013-04-14 10:31:13 (ID: 90974) Report Abuse
"htey" should be "they"
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sh8888
posted: 2013-04-14 10:37:51 (ID: 90975) Report Abuse
Also, maybe change "much more" to "instead", and, "basic set" to "initial recommendation" ..... so the sentence would become :-

instead they use it as an initial recommendation

The whole paragraph would be :-

Smart managers don't just accept the suggestion made by the Optimizer, instead they use it as an initial recommendation , and enhance it to have optimal training conditions for their players

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posted: 2013-04-14 10:40:39 (ID: 90976) Report Abuse
captainhero wrote:
"htey" should be "they"
of course

I meant an example for the whole sentence
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posted: 2013-04-14 10:42:33 (ID: 90977) Report Abuse
Fixed
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